Coder, Creative, Fungi🍄

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Cake day: October 21st, 2023

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  • Thanks. So nice to hear some feedback <3

    You are right about the story. I crafted the whole thing a bit more hasty than the last ones. It should be longer and have an actual story and maybe some new characters. I also need to improve my writing. I tried a more playful style for this one, because its adventerous and so on, but its too inconsistent.

    I’m thinking about extending and re-writing it, but am not sure if I will find the time. Thanks anyways :)















  • Thanks for the feedback.

    I really enjoyed that! I think the first section was the strongest to me personally – it was more grounded in real events, while some of the other sections lost some of their power by becomming too abstract. I did enjoy the aspect of different interconnected characters setting up eachothers stories.

    I totally get that. Thing is I wanted to depict some of the drama from the Fediverse in there and then you have to necessarily get a little abstract. I tried to include some of the drama happening here on Lemmy, however, its still not as exciting as I would hope it to be.

    I went ahead and shared it in my solarpunk bookclub, hopefully some more people will give it a read through!

    That’s great!

    Also it might be worth crossposting to a solarpunk community, it really fits the vibe :)

    Will do, will do